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I love "The end of golden came on a burnt Thursday." And the last stanza takes my breath away with its depth of meaning.
This is as short and harsh as a punch. Susie. Sometimes it just has to be like that.
"The end of golden came on a burnt Thursday" is wonderful. So well penned.
Oof. Great writing
all that ^. and more. powerful, Susie ~
Such a powerful and moving poem - succinct and clear - Jae
"We turned to shell" -- what an indictment and admission at once, and what a sorrow! Once again, Susie, you wield words like swords, devastatingly.
Deep as deep can be in so few words, Susie. Stunning.
Oof. "we turned to shell" Is there any better metaphor? Wow.
I love "The end of golden came on a burnt Thursday." And the last stanza takes my breath away with its depth of meaning.
ReplyDeleteThis is as short and harsh as a punch. Susie. Sometimes it just has to be like that.
ReplyDelete"The end of golden came on a burnt Thursday" is wonderful. So well penned.
ReplyDeleteOof. Great writing
ReplyDeleteall that ^. and more. powerful, Susie ~
ReplyDeleteSuch a powerful and moving poem - succinct and clear - Jae
ReplyDelete"We turned to shell" -- what an indictment and admission at once, and what a sorrow! Once again, Susie, you wield words like swords, devastatingly.
ReplyDeleteDeep as deep can be in so few words, Susie. Stunning.
ReplyDeleteOof. "we turned to shell" Is there any better metaphor? Wow.
ReplyDelete