Tuesday, May 7, 2024

When Doves Join Foxes



 

On the skeleton box car of bones and screams

the damned rattle the bars while

the wealthy dance their extravagance

along the tracks of hell.


Bloated on gold and blind to suffering

their pittance of charity doesn’t go as far

as their red leather shoe soles chasing recognition.


It doesn’t matter where I travel through history

the same is the same – The poor suffer

while the moneyed own the key to the wallet. 


When doves join foxes and creatures chase light,

the grave bell no longer scares the bleeding. 


Climbing stairs that only go down I carry a sword

with names of the who’s who of no longer should be.

A slice through a chain, a song of revolution

emboldens the desolate to seek retribution.


In the fire without smoke I watch the meek become bold.

There’s nothing fiercer than nothing left to lose.

I’m no superhero, no goddess demanding praise,

just a woman who wants to remove the rails

from the track so history can’t carry its malevolence

into the future. 

©Susie Clevenger 2024

Shay's Word Garden ~ Life After Life









6 comments:

  1. A song of revolution indeed, by a warrior poet. I love this, Susie.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Excellent - strong writing and so powerful - Well done.

    ReplyDelete
  3. It seems that every generation has to replay the whole song and dance that's been played and performed a thousand times before. The rich get richer, the poor get old, and young men go off to fight old men's wars. Time to tear up that tired old track.

    ReplyDelete
  4. The jury's not out and the verdict is in: this is a slam-dunk win for revolution, this couplet at its heart: "When doves join foxes and creatures chase light,/the grave bell no longer scares the bleeding." Give me a lever long enough and I'll help you tear up the tracks.

    ReplyDelete
  5. "Bloated on gold and blind to suffering

    their pittance of charity doesn’t go as far

    as their red leather shoe soles chasing recognition."

    Outstanding writing, Susie!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Yes. indeed, your poem and mine had similar themes. However, I really love the hopefuil nature of your last stanza! May those rails from the track be removed!

    ReplyDelete