tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post795080439804287759..comments2024-03-25T17:47:19.508-07:00Comments on Black Ink Howl: Concrete Flesh of MorningSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-28810272891292928862021-07-14T17:59:39.811-07:002021-07-14T17:59:39.811-07:00Susie, that last stanza is brilliant. Susie, that last stanza is brilliant. purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-89327197411218831622021-07-13T08:28:55.964-07:002021-07-13T08:28:55.964-07:00Those last few lines are an extremely potent image...Those last few lines are an extremely potent image - go to the top of the class! lolJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-27691830518762471522021-07-12T13:21:50.862-07:002021-07-12T13:21:50.862-07:00Expertly written, "caffeinated souls can see ...Expertly written, "caffeinated souls can see what they can't feel", me every morning! Love it!Phoenix Retributionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06547188512287201653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-54808390599964782432021-07-12T11:16:17.402-07:002021-07-12T11:16:17.402-07:00This is beautiful. This is beautiful. C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-32221957624984368362021-07-11T18:55:58.115-07:002021-07-11T18:55:58.115-07:00Each stanza is a powerful poetic force but that fi...Each stanza is a powerful poetic force but that final one is stunning! An amazing poem my friend!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-71774807359516590552021-07-11T18:10:20.462-07:002021-07-11T18:10:20.462-07:00Perfect rendering of the city waking up. I hated ...Perfect rendering of the city waking up. I hated too the harsh "Alarm clocks pound migraine drums" but now that we are both retired we hardly ever set the alarm. <br />..<br /><br />through my headJimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-19119437529974428312021-07-11T11:36:22.624-07:002021-07-11T11:36:22.624-07:00I do not miss the days of living and working in th...I do not miss the days of living and working in the city. Your poem vividly recalls why, especially the 2nd stanza. Absolutely the worst time of the day was when the alarm went off! JadeLihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-25687769848746500142021-07-11T10:41:48.293-07:002021-07-11T10:41:48.293-07:00Ah, the big city! You describe it well .....Ah, the big city! You describe it well .....Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-21204416947733786132021-07-11T10:37:37.376-07:002021-07-11T10:37:37.376-07:00Your new blog header is AMAZING! Wonderful descrip...Your new blog header is AMAZING! Wonderful description of city life. I so identify with the last stanza!!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-63767896826801736782021-07-11T10:20:17.684-07:002021-07-11T10:20:17.684-07:00Oh yes! Amazing language and imagery in that. So g...Oh yes! Amazing language and imagery in that. So good!!! I'd have to quote every stanza.qbithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08373768695201177514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2397499842210905447.post-5128104910685445802021-07-11T10:13:42.773-07:002021-07-11T10:13:42.773-07:00I know, right? We live in the proverbial interesti...I know, right? We live in the proverbial interesting times. Love your new header!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.com